The Underground Man by Ross Macdonald

The Underground Man by Ross Macdonald

 

published 1971





 

When reading Ross Macdonald I like to identify a sentence or two I feel could come from any/many of his books – nearly always the closing of a chapter. This time the sentences are the final lines of Chapter 1:

Half-way down [the stairs] I paused and leaned on the handrail and told myself that I was descending into trouble: a pretty young woman with a likeable boy and a wandering husband. A hot wind was blowing in my face.

Series protagonist Lew Archer is getting involved with the people who live downstairs, and obviously no good is going to come of it. But that’s how he rolls…

This entry is unexpectedly colliding with real life – a key element is wild brush fires in California, which is happening in real life to a momentous extent as I write.

It feels strange to be reading about events 50 years ago: people in danger, houses about to be destroyed, who will leave and who will stay.



And as this is a crime novel: what might be uncovered. The fire here is in Santa Teresa – a fictional town, but one that Sue Grafton borrowed from Macdonald for her Kinsey Milhone alphabet books.

There’s a young mother, worried about her son – his father has taken him to see his grandmother, and this is in prime burning territory. The mother, Jean, asks Lew Archer for help.

I opened the door. Her hair was up, and she had on a short stylish multicolored dress and white textured stockings. There was blue shadow on her eyelids and carmine lipstick on her mouth.

 


One of the things that always interests me in US crime novels is that a description of a person often includes an estimate of their weight – in this case this is an ordinary person talking, not even a police officer or PI:

‘She’s a good-looking blonde girl, about my height, five foot six. Nice figure. Perhaps she weighs 115 pounds or so. Her eyes are a shade of blue.

I absolutely cannot imagine any UK book character giving an idea of weight in figures – partly because it would sound ridiculous: ‘she’s around 8 stone 3 pounds’. Perhaps the new ideas about fat-shaming will end this feature.

There is also the usual evidence regarding that much-vaunted idea that there is no class-consciousness or snobbery in the USA. Exhibit A from the family matriarch:

‘The Armisteads are nouveaux riches from down south – not my kind of people.’

Shortly afterwards the same woman has this to say about her daughter-in-law (who is not, btw, an Armistead):

‘I never did think that their marriage would last.’

‘Why?’

‘Jean is an intelligent girl but she comes from an entirely different class.’

 

Macdonald writes in a memorable and dramatic way:

All I could see at first were the narrow shafts of sunlight that came through the holes in the blind drawn over the window. They were thrust across the room like the swords of a magician probing a basket to demonstrate that his partner had disappeared

And later this

By the time I got to them, the station wagon was turning in the entrance to Haven Road, its headlights swiping like long paintbrushes at the tree trunks.

The vision of life in southern California is always compelling.

A wayward daughter:

Everything was going along smoothly. She’d been accepted at UCLA and she was on a good summer program – tennis and diving lessons and conversational French.

This girl’s room:

The bedroom furniture, ivory with gold trim, was matched by stereo and television sets and a girl’s work desk with a white telephone.

Then there’s a grape-stake fence – I had to look that up but it’s not particularly exciting



And another moment:

Beside the pool a woman with black hair and gleaming copper-colored legs was sitting in a long chair which concealed the rest of her. A portable radio on a table beside her was talking to her

 


In one way it’s the usual stuff: very readable, missing people, very sad. And with the fires and environmental concerns:

He belonged to a generation whose elders had been poisoned, like the pelicans, with a kind of moral DDT that damaged the lives of their young.

This refers back to an earlier comment:

‘Did you see the pelicans at Dunes Bay? They can’t have any more young ones, did you know that? Their bodies are poisoned with DDT, and it makes their eggs all break.’

-And I could imagine it coming over as bathetic or a hammered home metaphor, but instead it is bleak and touching.

And, weirdly, the book reminded me of the Meat Loaf/Jim Steinman song Lost Boys and Golden Girls, which could be the title for many a Ross Macdonald book, and very much this one. He was a great writer, one of the best.

Colourful young women from the Vivat Tumbler

Pool picture is from the Florida Memories collection.

Fire picture from the US National Archives, 1973


 

Comments

  1. Macdonald always had such a strong sense of the Southern California setting, both cultural and physical. You really feel you're there. And after living in SoCal, I can also see how accurate his depictions are. This is definitely a very timely book, and a reminder that the more things change, the more they don't.

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    1. yes indeed Margot - and a reminder that environmental issues have been around a long time.

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  2. "Then there’s a grape-stake fence – I had to look that up but it’s not particularly exciting" Not particularly sturdy, either. The first house we moved into (we were stationed in SoCal from 1983-1988) had one, and our German shepherd went right through it.

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    1. That was my thought when I looked them up. And now have a very clear image of the dog pushing through it, like a scene from a 1980s family comedy. (I see Steve Martin having reassured the family next door that the dog was friendly, then having to deal with the consequences)

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  3. Yes, today I was thinking of novels that involved fires in Southern California. Weight: American men have generally been put through a few weeks of wrestling in high school physical education classes, which may give one an eye for weight. I would not find a description including an estimate of weight to be anything questionable.

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    1. Yes, I sounded more judge-y than I meant to - I am more interested in the national differences. The quote above was from a woman btw, and not one who sounds as though she did wrestling.
      I can understand it more in an official police-type description, but in everyday life it just wouldn't happen in the UK. I want to ask them 'are you sure?' because while height is guessable, I'm not so sure weight is!

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    2. Perhaps people in Southern California aren't as well wrapped-up against the cold as in the UK so weight is easier to estimate. I prefer MacDonald's wife, Margaret Millar, myself. The repeated first-person narrator has disadvantages as a technique, especially when the narrator is supposed to be a hard-bitten PI, who comes up with wonderful writing. Same problem with Chandler.
      The classic novel of Southern Californian fire is George R Stewart's... wait for it... Fire.
      - Roger, anonymised again!

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    3. it's not just in Southern California! They can be wrapped up against the New England snows and they'll still be telling you that a person weighs around 150 pounds.
      On my personal rep seesaw, Millar and Chandler have gone down, while Macdonald has gone up. I found him too miserable and too same-y in the past, and now I really like that...
      I had never heard of George R Stewart, and am open-mouthed after looking him up - what an extraordinary man, with such a wide range of interests.

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    4. IMO we're much too weight-obsessed over here! SoCal may be the worst, but as you said, it's everywhere. I'm reading Jane Haddam's Patience McKenna series, set in NY and NE, and she is noting people's weights all the time!

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    5. I think it's a real feature of books of the end of the 20th century - I suspect I wouldn't have noticed at the time, but reading them now it stands out a mile - weight estimates, and very judge-y comments about people's shape. No recognition that people vary, and very much seen as virtuous to be thin. It's quite striking.

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  4. Christine Harding11 January 2025 at 11:19

    Love the pictures! I remember textured and patterned tights - they made my legs look diseased! And white shoes with heels like the ones in the top picture. They looked like patent leather, but were actually coated in some kind of thin plastic, which peeled off with wear!

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    1. Yes, I always wanted to like patterned tights more than I did! And yes, white plastic shoes were the pits. It is difficult to be objective about any era of fashion - but we are allowed to say there were some bad choices then!

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    2. I also had patterned tights and shoes similar to the ones in the top picture. Yes, some bad choices, no doubt, but there was so much that was fresh and exciting. How I loved my Mary Quant lipstick!

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    3. That was Chrissie

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    4. I guessed! Oh yes, Mary Quant lipstick and nail varnish. I had a favourite shade and I can't remember what it was called - do you remember yours? I might have to go and find a list, there surely is one on the internet...

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  5. I think it was called something like Ring-a-Rosy!

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    1. Oh that rings a bell. I've just been looking online, and up popped the tin of crayons, which was the pride of my life at one time - much saved up for I'm guessing - a bright yellow flat tin, with about 10 lip, eye, blush crayons in a wide range of colours. I could remember the feel of it and how exciting it was...

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  6. It has remained my ideal lipstick, never to be bettered - or discovered again.

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    1. I think that resonates with many of us. The Lost Lipstick would make a good title for something...

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